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Well lets continue. Now it`s FAQ (with capital "A").

1) "How to start play Ultima Online!?" - I think it would be "start playing".

1. "you need to start play Ultima" - "to start playing".
2. "account is registered" - maybe "is being registered"?
3. "with a view of safety" - better to say "for the sake of security" or something like that.
4. "Download the game, if you already" - the sentence is incorrect. You should say "Download the game.(dot!) If you already..."
5. "If you download game" - "the game".
6. "Now extract file" - "now unpack file".
7. "find and execute client.exe" - "find and launch".
8. "appeared window of game" - maybe "of the game"?
9. "the page of creating your character" - "character creation page".
10. "game universe Ultima" - "game universe of Ultima...".
11. "life in Ultima online has been started" - I`m not sure of it, but maybe "have been started" or "have started"?
12. "can gather in section" - "can get in the section".
13. " forum of game" - "game forum".

2) "Creating character" - you should say "Character creation".

1. "will be asked, whom you wish" - I think it looks like "asked of who you wish".
2. "Safely choose the third way." - wrong word order. "Choose the third way safely".
3. "Strength influences on power of your hit, and on maximal weight" - no need for "on". "Strength influences power of your hit, and maximal weight..".
4. "magic lives" - "lifes"(!!!)
5. "The more mana has than more spells for time you can make." - stupid sentence (in russian too). This should be "The more mana he has the more spells at a time he can cast." or "The more mana you have the more spells at a time you can cast.". Feel the difference.
6. "be equal 50" - I think "equal to".
7. "to say of a spell" - "to cast a spell" (!!).
8. "that the most part of them will work" - it's better to say "that most of them will work (or succeed)".
9. "Secondary you may choose" - maybe "as for second you may choose"?
10. "allow you to make itself the weapons and armours" - "to make weapons and armour by yourself".
11. "basically it chooses" - "it is chosen", I think.
12. "is difficult process" - "is a difficult".
13. "it need a lot" - "it needs".
14. "choose Minoc as in it there" - "as there".
15. "can battle not to the strongest" - perhaps "battle with not-so-strong monsters", but you should re-translate that sentence anyway.

That`s it. For now.