Тема: Grammar mistakes
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Re: Grammar mistakes
Старый 10.02.2007, 01:26   #7
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It is not easy to find an online game, which you would like at once, and if you need a free multiplayer online game, begins even more difficult to find the ideal, because the game should like not only for you, but also to all other players, with whom you will play at huge MMORPG world.
This sentence doesn't have any meaning at all)) try to simplify it somehow and break into several small sentences. And don't use these silly online translators

It takes some time to find an online game which you will like at once. If you are searching for a free multiplayer online game, it is difficult to find the perfect one, as different players has different ideals.

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in a circle of the friends and familiar
totall mess))))
"among friends"-shorter and better)

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In Ultima Online practically there are no limits for self-expression!
You have to say " In Ultima Online there are practically no limits for self-expression!"

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without any limitations!
Just "without any limits"
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