Re: Grammar mistakes
Not quite a mistakes, but I think you should know.
On main page:
"to start to play" - I`d say "start playing".
"to find online game" - maybe "an online game"?
"would like you" - "you would like" suits better. And this whole sentence is a mess. You should reconsider the translation and make it more literary.
"to enjoy by multiplayer role game" - I don`t see any real necessity in this "by".
"adherents" - just too odd. Maybe "familiar"?
"fantastic middle ages world" - you should say "medieval world".
"the hunter on the monsters" - "monster hunter".
"marine wolf" - AFAIR it`s "sea wolf".
"hunter for ancient treasures" - again "ancient treasures hunter".
"If you want to become...just to find the friends?" - W0W! That sentence is a nonsence. In the russian version either. Work on it.
"to be the one, by whom you wish" - again odd. Try to re-translate it in some other way.
That`s so far for the main page.
P.S. BTW English language don`t need as much commas as russian does.
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